Like a two-dollar whore, Duplicitous,perfidious, Like sparks and burning twigs, Dangerous ideas come to life... Her splintered loss, I grieve in somber velvet, Her rekindled rage, My heart echoes bloodless and incensed.
"Dangerous ideas come to life... Her splintered loss, I grieve in somber velvet"
This is beautiful, just sheer raw-emotion truth! I'm very impressed with your work so far, and I know that it is young and just beginning, but I am very intrigued to see where you go with your efforts.
Your wording reminds me, and I don't mean to label you...but it just reminds me of Modest Mouse.
Consider yourself having another follower. Thanks Sphinx!
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"Dangerous ideas come to life...
Her splintered loss,
I grieve in somber velvet"
This is beautiful, just sheer raw-emotion truth! I'm very impressed with your work so far, and I know that it is young and just beginning, but I am very intrigued to see where you go with your efforts.
Your wording reminds me, and I don't mean to label you...but it just reminds me of Modest Mouse.
Consider yourself having another follower. Thanks Sphinx!
Firas: It's a secret..
Mark: Thanks a lot man!I really enjoy your writings too. =)
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